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His touch is more tender than she would’ve expected. Almost disbelieving as his palm skates across the curve of her breast, a stark contrast to the sharp intensity of his tongue in her mouth, deep and searching, seeking her with a desperation she can taste, feel down into her fingertips and toes. Heat flares through her, the blood roaring in her ears, pounding in her lips.
She covers his hand, squeezes so that his fingers dig into her flesh and she moans into his mouth as the sensation sharpens, shoots straight to her midsection, leaving her wet, aching, wanting.
"You’re mine," he growls, his voice raw and possessive, squeezing her again while his leg pushes between her legs.
She clamps around him, shivers in his arms as she rides his thigh, seeking the hard pressure against her middle, the bright, intense flares that shoot through her, spiraling her higher and higher, so fast, unstoppable and “yessss,” she hisses, can’t help it, her head falling back, fingers digging into the flesh of his shoulder. She is his, she’s been for so long. She thought she had lost him and it hurt more than she could’ve ever imagined.
His mouth attaches to her jaw, lips and tongue and teeth finding a path down the column of her throat.
"Mine," he repeats, softer this time, quieter, more like a prayer laid at the altar of her skin. There’s an ache there that’s undeniable, a desperate plea that speaks of the the pain he endured, the hurt he felt, the fear of losing her and it’s eye-opening, just how much he wants her, needs her.
She hooks her thigh over his hip, presses herself closer, so close that there’s no space left between them, close enough that he can feel the race of her heartbeat, the chopped rhythm of her breathing. Wraps her hands around his face, palms cradled to his jaw, until he looks at her, eyes heavy-lidded, darkened with arousal, silent yearning drawn into every line of his face.
When writing dialogue in your Castle fanfic, if you’re having trouble finding the characters “voices,” a good trick is to watch a couple of scenes from your favorite episode and write down all of the dialogue as though it were a scene in your story. This will give you a visual cue as to how the characters actually speak, and help you make their “voices” read more authentically in your story.